Friday, July 30, 2010

Call and Response: 31: No Travel Required

Who are you going to call
when everyone you love is
sleeping in the same room
with you under rain on the roof
and lifting of hesitation

Within your wide open
window heart

3 comments:

  1. The old red phone booth stood against the newly renovated building like a sentinel that would never budge. And I liked the way the tile X seemed to mark the spot.

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  2. ( I had a sad flash from your beautiful poem...)

    Who are you going to call
    when everyone you love is
    sleeping in the same room
    with you under rain on the roof
    the constraint of hesitation

    afraid to call out

    because even if you did
    they wouldn't hear you
    or wouldn't know
    what to say

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